Thursday 20 December 2012

The Demon Side: 3


The Demon Side: 3

"Liaaaaaaam", everyone screamed, and they ran toward me.

I was on the ground looking at the sky. I couldn't move anything. Everything was turning around, everything was unclear. I saw everyone standing infront of me crying.

"Mom, take care of everyone", I said, breathing my last breath. "I lov.....".

"Liaaaaam", mom said and started to cry. I can feel her tears falling on my chest.

And while I was adjusting to death, and ambulance came and I can feel that someone was picking me up from the ground and dragging me through the ambulance. As soon as I was in, my eyes were shut.

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I was on the hospital bed, I can know it. I couldn't move, nor speak, but I can feel and hear everything. I heard mom's voice next to me, and I can hear a doctor in the room.

"Tell us doctor, is he gonna be okay?", mom asked the doctor. It seemed like she's the only one that cared. I don't hear dad crying.

"Well, I'm sorry, but I can't tell you right now. The only thing I know right now is that his situation is dangerous", the doctor said.

Mom started to cry even more, and crying and crying. The thing that the doctor told her really broke her heart.

"It's all your fault", mom started to scream, and I knew instantly that she was screaming at her husband because if he didn't kick me out, you know the rest.

"I didn't mean what I said", dad said in a desperate voice. I can tell from his the tone of his voice.

"Then why did you say it?", she started screaming louder. Then suddenly, the door opened and another doctor said "Excuse me, but the visit time is over, sorry".

Then mom came and kissed me on the head, and then left, I was alone in the room now.

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                                                      Now the narrative type is changed

Raimonda (the mother) sat in Liam's room decorating it, she put "Welcome Back" sign over the door. "What are you doing? Why did you put this sign?, He didn't get back", Mark (the father) said to his wife. He was putting on his jacket because it was storming.

"Yet", Raimonda said. "He will get back. I've never seen a father that hates his son like that before".

"I don't hate him, Mr. Anderson (the father) said. He came and sat next to her. "I don't hate him, but hearing that he hit the boys made me angry".

"Angry enough to kill him?", Mrs. Anderson said. She is really upset with Mark.

Mark kissed her and started to leave when Raimonda asked, "Where are you going?", wiping the tears from her eyes.

"I'm going to the new house, I need to do something there", Mark told his wife.

"Alright, but don't be late. We're going to see Liam today. The doctor called and said that Liam got better".

"I won't".

"Dad, where are you going?", the boys asked. Running to their father.

"To the new house, wanna come?".

"Sure, just wait a minute until we wear our jackets".

"Dad, can we come with you?", the princesses asked their father.

"No, sweeties. You're staying with me and help me decorating for Liam", Raimonda told the little girls. They we're really excited to go and see the new house, but they chose their brother than the house.

Mark went down the stairs and waited his boys in the car, and as soon as he got into the car, he saw the boys coming. They got into the car and Mr. Anderson was on his way.

Fifteen-minutes later, they arrived. Everyone got out of the car and entered the house. The twins started running all around the house, exploring it.

"Don't break anything, boys", Mark told the boys, then he went to the house library to bring the thing that he wanted to get. He took a book called "The possession".

The house looked nice and well decorated from the outside and the inside, but it also looked like those scary houses that appears in every horror movie.

"Dad, get up here", the boys shouted to their father from the attic. Mr. Anderson got up there to see what they wanted. He entered with a creaking sound beneath his feet everytime he took a step the attic and saw both of them standing still and staring at a little box.

"What are you doing here?, and what are you staring at?", Mark asked his kids. He got closer and closer to them.

The boys were trembling and shaking and they haven't even opened the box yet.

"Dad, look at what is written on the box", Daniel told his father with a scared voice.

The writing on the box said, "Don't open".

"That's it?", Mark asked Daniel. "You are scared of a box that said "Don't open" ?".

But Timmy noticed little words written on the box under the "Don't open" thing.

"Dad, this isn't the only thing that's written on the box", Timmy said. "Look under the writing".

Mark focused his sight on those little words. The little words said "Demon danger, don't open or bad things will never leave your life again".

And suddenly, while everyone was reading what the little words said. The attic door shut and slammed hard by itself. Everyone freaked out and jumped from their places and landing with a *THUD* on the attic creaky floor.

"It's probably the wind", the father explained, trying not to freak out his kids.

"Let's just take this box and get out of here. By the way, we have to show it to mom, Liam, and the  girls". Timmy said. He was super excited about the box. "And we have to open it and see what's there".

 "Are you crazy?", Daniel freaked out at his brother. "Can't you read?, the box said "Demon danger" he was doing crazy hand signals.

"I can't believe that you believe in this stuff", Timmy told Daniel. "And you're even older than me".

"By the way son, there's no such things as ghosts and demons", Mark said to Daniel, trying to calm him. "It's all just some stuff that crazy and insane people say".

Timmy held the box with excitement in his hands and rushed like a rocket to the car.

Everyone was in the car now, and Mark went to the house to bring his wife and his girls to go see Liam in the hospital.

*Beep* *Beep*, the horn of the car did his sound. Mrs. Anderson came showed with the girls next to her wearing puffy pink dresses. They looked like princesses now. Real princesses.

"Hurry, we don't want to be late", Mark told his wife. He was in a hurry. "I'm coming, Mr. Anderson", Raimonda said. As you know now, Anderson is the family name, and sometimes, this family calls each other by their family name. And Raimonda usually calls them with their names whether she's happy or sad.

Mark was on his way by now. It is 10:00 P.M.

"It's getting late", Raimonda told him. She was really excited about what the doctor told her.

Everyone arrived to the hospital, and they rushed to the room and saw doctors sitting there.


"What's wrong?", Raimonda asked in confusion. She got really scared.

One of the doctors stood up and came to Mrs. Anderson. He was staring straight to her eyes, and she knew exactly that something was wrong.

"I'm really sorry", the doctor said.

"Sorry f\or what?"

"He passed away", the doctor said the bad news.

"Noooooooooo", Raimonda screamed and fell on the ground crying. "This can't happen. He can't die", Raimonda continued crying.

Mr. Anderson left and sat on the chairs with tears running down from his eyes. He can hear his wife shouting, "Liam, talk to me, taaalk too meee", and crying.

"It's all my fault. I killed him", Mark started talking to himself. Timmy and Daniel were sitting next to their brother. They were sad for their brother, but no tears came down from their eyes. They just sat there with the box on their lap.

"Hey, let's open that box and see what's in it", Daniel told Timmy. He really didn't care about his older brother.

"What? Liam is dead and all you care about is your stupid box?", Timmy said. "We're the ones who killed him".

"Never mind, I'll open it", Daniel moved away from Timmy and took the box with him, he sat alone and opened it slowly.

The box was now opened and all what Daniel found is a paper. He got really upset about the box more than being upset about his dead brother. He was expecting something more interesting, but he took the paper and realized that it was a letter. Daniel started reading.

Timmy sat alone thinking about his older brother, and then he took a look at Daniel and saw a shocking expression on his face. Daniel was shocked about what he was reading. And suddenly, he got really terrified and threw the paper and the box away from him...

Wednesday 19 December 2012

The Demon Side: 2

The Demon Side: 2

"I'm not giving them any chances, they brought that to themselves", I told Miranda.

She gave me the keys and I opened the car. "Get in girls", I told them.

They got into the car, and before I sat in the front seat, and saw Timmy and Daniel standing there looking at me in jealousy. From the look of their eyes, I actually understood what they wanted to say. It was like they're saying "Sorry, come back, take us with you", but I ignored them and got into the car and left.

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We arrived to the shop and sat on a table, as soon as I sat, mom called me. "Yes, mom?", I started. The waiter came while I was on the phone, so I did a hand signal that means "Hang on a sec.".

"Why did you do that to your brothers?", mom asked. I should have known that she called me to say that.

"Mom, they deserve it, and I don't have time to talk abut them", I replied to her answer.

"You have to respect them", she said. Respect them?, Seriously, I thought.

"Let them learn how to respect first, then maybe I'll think about respecting them", I said. I started to get angry. Mom hanged up. "Sorry", I said to the poor waiter that had to listen to what I was saying.

We ordered ice cream, ofcourse, and ate them. Also, I got extra ice cream for Daniel and Timmy. We left the store and got to the car. "Girls, how about we drop by the new house and check it out?", I asked them.

"Maybe we shouldn't. Dad is keeping it as a surprise. By the way, how do you know it's way if dad didn't tell anyone where it is?", Christina asked. She's really tricky. "Uhhhm. Christina, you look sick", I immediately changed the subject, and also I looked at her face and it was looking pale, maybe she was sick or something.

I drove all the way home and parked the car in the garage.

"Mom, we're back", the girls said. They both rushed to their room.

I entered the house and saw Daniel, Timmy, and mom sitting on the table thinking. "I brought you extra ice cream, guys", I told them and put the ice cream box on the table. I was about to go to my room when I heard something hit the floor.

I looked back and saw the ice cream box on the floor. "I don't want your stupid ice cream", Timmy said.

I stopped for a brief second and then started to move toward them. "Look you little crap, if you're not gonna respect me, both, I'm never talking to you ever again, and maybe something worse might happen to you. Understood?", I said angrily. "And before I leave the house from one hour ago, you were crying like a two years old baby, begging to go with me".

"I wasn't crying because I wanted to go with you, I was crying because you are my brother", Timmy said rudely.

I slapped him on his face really hard and told him to shut up. He crossed the line this time.

"LIAM", mom screamed.

"I'm telling dad", Daniel said, sitting next to his crying brother. "He'll know how to deal with you".

I couldn't believe what I was hearing. He is a fourteen years old little boy and knows how to speak adult words. Who do he think he is?, I thought.

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Dad came from work early. He came right on time for dinner, and here, Daniel and Timmy are going to say what happened.

All of us were eating when Daniel started the conversation.

"Dad, I have to tell you something", he started. His mouth was full of food, then he swallowed and continued. "Liam hit me today in the morning".

Dad suddenly stopped eating and looked at me then at Daniel.

"What did you just say right now?", dad asked in a shock. He swallowed and dropped his sandwich on the table.

"He said that I hit him today", I talked instead of Daniel. I'm the one that supposed to say what happened , not Daniel, I said to myself.

"And why did you do that, mister?", dad said. I guess he was angry because it's the first time I hit one of my brothers.

"Dad, they are not respecting me", I explained. "I'm their old brother, I have to get some respect from them".

"Yeah, well that doesn't give you the right to hit one of them", dad replied. He was on Timmy & Daniel's side while he supposed to be at mine.

"Dad, why do you think I love Christina & Miranda and don't even hit them?", I asked, it wasn't really meant to be a question, just a point of view to try to explain the whole idea.

"So you mean that you don't love your brothers?", dad asked me. He understood the idea in a wrong way.

"I don't mean that", I told him. "I mean that I love them and never fight with them because they respect me".

"You don't even dare to get in a fight with them"

"Ohhh, for God's sake, understand me"

"I understand you, I'm not dumb"

"Oh God, dad what's your problem today?", I shouted at my own dad.

"How dare you shout at me?", dad shouted at me back. "You're my problem. In this house, there is rules and the rules are that we have to respect and love each other".

"That's what I'm trying to say", I continued shouting. I've lost my mind.

"Look, whether you respect your brothers, or you get out of this house and never come back", dad said.

What? WTF? My dad actually kicked me out of the house?, I thought.

"I choose to go", I stood up, and walked away.

"Liam, wait", the girls said. They ran to me and hugged me. "Don't go, please". They started to cry.

"Don't worry, girls. I'll be fine", I said to them. "It's what you're DAD wants".

I kissed them on their heads and opened the door. I took a look back and then left the house.

I started to walk and I wanted to cross the road. As I was crossing, I saw lights. I looked at my right and saw a truck coming right throw my whole body and it hit me so hard. 

Tuesday 18 December 2012

The Demon Side: 1


Alright, this is a story I've been writing, forgive me if there is some mistakes.

The Demon Side 1:

I saw dead people on the ground. People shredded apart, no head, no arm, no BODY.

Who did this? I asked myself. Who killed all these people? I asked myself again.

I killed them all, I killed all these innocent people, but this isn't the only weird thing. I saw buildings falling apart. Destroyed buildings. Ruined buildings. And the color of the sky looked like the color of the desert's sky.

Everything was wrong. How could I do all these stuff?!. And here begins the story....


We are moving out of our house because we found a better place to live in. Even cooler than the place that we are living in now. My dad said that we will feel more comfortable in the new house. I'm an 18 years old guy that still lives with his parents. I have a girlfriend, but I don't own a house to live in with her. I have two twin brothers and two twin sisters. I'm the oldest one between them. I always call the boys "The Evil Twins", and I call the girls "The Cute Princesses". The boys are 14 years old and the girls are 13. Eventhough the boys and the girls are twins, but it's easy to separate them. I separate them from their eyes.

Daniel's eyes (the older boy twin) are colored, just like everyone, but his right eye is blue and his left one is light grey while Timmy's (the younger boy twin) right eye is light grey and the left one is blue. Now the girls, Miranda's eyes (the older girl twin) are like Daniel's, and Christina's eyes (the younger girl twin) are like Timmy.

"We have a week to pack up all of our stuff", dad said. He looked like he was in a hurry. He was going to his work, I guess. "Kids, I need to tell you something, but I don't want you to get scared, okay?".

Kids? I'm not a kid anymore, I thought.

"Uhhmm, dad?, by saying kids...", I was about to complete my sentence when dad interrupted me and said, "I don't mean you, Liam".

He actually knew what I was about to say. "Cool, but that wasn't what I wanted to say", I lied. Everyone lies.

"Then what were you about to say?", dad asked in confusion. He finished his breakfast and stood up, "Hurry, say, I'm late".

"I was about to tell you, uhhh, ummm, okay that's what I was about to say", I said sarcastically. I looked at dad and saw the anger in his eyes.

"You are a waste of time", dad told me. He kissed mom and the kids and then left.

"Thank you, dad. Love you too", I said sarcastically, again. It's like I'm in a good mood today.

I looked at everybody in the room and noticed that everyone was staring at me.

"What?", I asked. It was creepy, I mean, why are they looking at me in this creepy way? Why are they even looking at me?.

"Liam, you have to stop lying", mom said. Sometimes, mom acts like a philosopher, but I like her anyway. Ofcourse I have to like her, she's my mother. "That's a bad habit", she said and looked at me like I murdered someone. She is pretty and her eyes are even prettier, they are like cat eyes, whenever she looks at me like that, I imagine a cat about to attack.

"Come on, it's just a white lie. Don't make a big deal out of it", I said. I took my cereal bowl and put it in the dishwasher. "By the way, I wasn't even lying, it was just a joke, duhh!!".

"Liar, liar, you're pants on fire", the evil twins said. They think That they are funny. They always tease me and I'm older than them.

"Shut up!", I said in anger.

"Liam, respect your brothers", mom shouted at me. You are shouting at me?, you should shout on them, I wanted to say, but I didn't.

"But mom, how am I supposed to respect them if they don't even respect me?", I said, doing hand signals. "I'm the big one around here".

"And the stupid one", they said. I was so furious at them, but I didn't say anything because I have to respect them like MOM said.

"Now really shut up boys", mom shrieked at them. They are so rude. "He is your older brother and you have to respect him".

"Alright girls, are you done with your breakfast? because I'm taking both of you, just both of you to the ice cream shop", I said the the princesses, irritating the boys, but I'm not lying, I'm taking them to the shop.

"Yaaaaaay", the princesses shouted. They were so happy, and so excited. They rushed to their rooms to change.

"Alright, Timmy, we need to go change too", Daniel said. He actually thought that I'm taking them with me. "Change for what?", I asked Daniel like I didn't know what he was talking about. "Go change since we're going with you to the ice cream shop, you said that, remember?", Daniel replied.

"I remember saying something about going to the ice cream shop, but I don't remember saying that I'm taking you with me", I told him. I didn't say that I'm taking them with me, didn't he hear me when I said to the girls " Just both of you" ?, I thought. "I'm not taking you with me, guys".

"Yes, you are", Timmy stood on Daniel's side.

"No, I'm not", I shouted at them. "That should teach you for messing with me".

I looked at the stairs and saw the girls running toward me. "We're ready", they said. They are so cute, unlike the boys.

"Okay, let's go", I held Miranda's hand and Christina's hand and got to the door and opened it. "Bye, mom".

I left the boys home. They deserved it, I thought.

I looked at the outdoor window and saw Daniel and Timmy crying. You wouldn't be crying if you weren't so rude to me.

I got to the car and then I remembered that I forgot my keys in the house. I didn't want to go there because I didn't want to face Daniel and Timmy and hear their cries.

"Miranda, can you go to the house and get me my keys? they are on the dining table", I asked her. "Ofcourse I'll go", she replied. What a cute little girl, I thought.

Christina and I waited for like ten minutes, and then we saw Miranda running toward us.

"What took you so long?", Christina asked her twin sister. Miranda was tired from running, you know little girls.

"I'm sorry, mom was talking to me about Daniel and Timmy", Miranda said in her tired voice. "She told me to ask you if you could give them a second chance".

Monday 17 December 2012

Hey everyone, this is me Luther Kanso. So, lately, I thought about how people really get excited about some stories some people post, so I thought about posting some. If you're interested, then comment on this blog and tell me that you want. I'll be waiting. Thank you

Sunday 16 December 2012

Haylor, to the end

With an interview with " One Direction ", the interviewer asked them who is single? Zayn and Harry raised their hands, which means that they are single, so this means that Harry Styles & Taylor Swift broke up? yes, they actually did, some of the directioners thought that "Haylor" didn't even happen, but they were all wrong, so obviously they had been dating for a while, not a long while, and broke up in the end. Keep up with me for more exciting stuff.


Luther Kanso

2012, A Big Lie

Alright, People all around the world are driving me crazy that in December 21, the world is coming up to an end, but that's all false, and I've been checking out some websites, and doing some researches about that, and I noticed that they had put Gangnam Style is the main reason for the end of the world like when Nostradamus said " From the calm morning, the end will come when of the dancing horse the circles will be nine ", everyone made that prediction that it was meant for Gangnam Style because Korea is called " the calm morning " country, and PSY's dance looks like you are riding a horse, and he got a billion hits which means that " 1,000,000,000 ", nine zero's and a zero means or looks like a circle, so don't believe what anyone say about 2012 that it's the end of the world, it's all just rumors and lies.


Luther Kanso, Hope you enjoyed it
Alright, so I just started this blog and I promise that I'm gonna post exciting things on it, so please if anyone interested just let me know and I wanna know how many hits and comments I'm gonna get on this so I can make sure to post stuff